

Prompt / Lyrics
[Verse 1] I saw the love fade from your eyes Half a heartbeat Barely a blink But it split our world in two Your hand still warm in mine Mouth saying “it’s alright” But the room turned colder Like it already knew [Pre-Chorus] You looked past my shoulder At some future I can’t touch I said your name so softly You didn’t flinch You didn’t rush [Chorus] I saw the love fade from your eyes Slow as winter taking over July Every color draining out of our sky While you were smiling Saying “we’re fine” I felt the floor fall under my life When I saw the love fade from your eyes [Verse 2] Coffee cup between us Steam rose Then disappeared Your laugh hit all the right notes But the harmony was fear You traced a ring on the table Round and round Wearing it thin I kept searching in your pupils For the place I used to live in [Pre-Chorus] You said “we’ll always have this” But your voice was somewhere else Like you’d already packed the boxes And stacked them on the shelf [Chorus] [Bridge] [low vocal register] Tell me Was there a moment You remember letting go? Or did it slip out in the silence Between the words we’d rehearsed so long? [crescendo] ’Cause I’m still here in that second Where everything quietly died Frozen in the flicker Of your leaving eyes [Chorus]
Tags
Haunting, cinematic ballad with a slow-burn arc. Intimate piano and close-miked male vocal in the first verse, almost a whisper. Strings creep in under the pre-chorus, then swell wide on the chorus with low pads and distant toms for weight. Second verse adds subtle guitar harmonics; final chorus lifts with stacked harmonies, a mournful solo violin answering key lines, then everything drops back to bare piano and voice on the last phrase., slow, male vocals, deep, raw
4:07
No
12/26/2025