

Prompt / Lyrics
[Verse 1] You were all sharp bones and summer Cigarette laugh in the rain Tracing halos on the window Said you liked the way they stained Black boots on the motel carpet Shaking hands But playing brave You were dancing with the shadows I was begging them to stay away [Chorus] You were halfway to heaven When I found you in that room Eyes rolled back like a crescent moon I was screaming your name But you floated right through You were halfway to heaven And I lost you too soon [Verse 2] Late calls from a busted payphone I could hear it in your breath Every promise like a matchstick Burning shorter Burning red I held you through the cold December You said "Baby I'll get clean" But that needle wrote an ending That I never thought you'd read [Chorus] [Bridge] [low vocal register] I still see you on the mattress Skin like paper Lips gone blue All the saints stuck to the ceiling Watching what I couldn't undo [whispered vocals] I tried to pull you backward From that bright and silent sea But you slipped just like the sunlight Through the spaces left in me [Chorus]
Tags
rock, Hypnotic dark rock with a circular, slightly overdriven bass line locked to tom-heavy drums; guitars washed in long, eerie reverb and occasional feedback swells. Male vocals, raw and gritty, sit upfront with a trance-like delivery that opens into ragged, pleading wails on the hook. Verses ride a mid-tempo groove, drums and bass pulsing like a ritual; choruses bloom with stacked, distant harmonies and octave guitars underscoring the grief. Bridge strips to bass, floor toms, and voice before a final, cathartic full-band crash., trance, hypnotic, vocal
5:21
No
1/10/2026