Track · Jan 7, 2026 · English

Bite My Broken Prayers

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4:03

Language

English

Lyrics

[Intro]

[low vocal register]

Hands folded till the knuckles split

I wore the floorboards thin

Mouth full of holy scripts

Teeth full of grit

[Verse 1]

They said

"ask"

So I asked till my lungs went glass

White coats

Wires

That slow red graph

Beeping like some bored clock

Counting down the last laugh

I named You in the hospital light

Tried to pull You into the room

But the ceiling just stared right back

Like it was waiting

For the vacuum to bloom

[Chorus]

So where were You

When the room went quiet?

When the air turned heavy

And the hands unclenched?

I carved your name

Into my own silence

Prayed till my throat burned out

You didn’t even flinch

[Verse 2]

They said

"plan"

They said

"purpose in the pain"

While we boxed up clothes

Found receipts

For a life that won't happen again

I set fire to the sympathy cards

Watched saints curl up in smoke

Every promise printed in gold

Turned black

Turned joke

I used to close my eyes to speak

Now I stare straight ahead when I swear your name

Every "amen" tastes like rust

Like I swallowed all the blame

[Chorus]

So where were You

When the room went quiet?

When the air turned heavy

And the hands unclenched?

I carved your name

Into my own silence

Prayed till my throat burned out

You didn’t even flinch

[Bridge]

[guitar riff widens

Drums half-time]

If this is mercy

You can keep it

If this is love

I don't need it

Take back your verses

Take back your vows

I screamed myself ragged

You stayed in the clouds

[Chorus]

[crecendo]

Style

metalhybrid progressive metal meets dark alt r&bmale vocals. intro is sparseswung drums and distant reverb guitarvocal almost spoken. verses ride syncopateddown-tuned polymeter riffs with tight bass; vocal glides between low melodic lines and gritty half-screams. chorus explodes in straight 4 feelwide distorted guitars and stacked harmonies over a hugeanchoring kick. bridge drops to filtered drums and clean guitar arpeggios before a crushing final chorus with octave-doubled lead and ambient feedback tail.progressive metalelectricalternative r&benglish

Prompt

metal, Hybrid progressive metal meets dark alternative R&B: down-tuned polymeter guitars, electric guitars, male. About death and grief and prayers and being absolutely pissed god didn’t do anything

Credits

Prompt by

Crimzn

GeneratedJan 7, 2026

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