"MAKE IT STOP" (Dark Rock / Metal Version)
(Intro – Haunting & Brooding, Slow Build-Up)
(Whispered, eerie, fading in)
Spinning, spinning…
Can’t slow it down…
Trapped inside…
Let me drown…
(Heavy drums hit. Guitars grind in.)
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(Verse 1 – Boiling Rage)
Spinning fast, can’t shut it down
Fire burns, I’m gonna drown
Scream for help—no one hears
Choking on my darkest fears
Fists are clenched, walls closing in
Tired of fighting, can’t fucking win
I swear to god, I’ve had enough
Sick of feeling I’m not enough
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(Pre-Chorus – The Breaking Point)
I’m sick of this, I’m done with this
I need a break, I need to quit
It don’t stop, it won’t give in
Like my mind is caving in
(Guitars cut out—just deep bass and drums thumping like a heartbeat.)
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(Chorus – Explosive & Defiant)
MAKE IT STOP, MAKE IT BREAK
I’m about to fucking cave
I need strength, I need a spark
Before I drown inside the dark
MAKE IT STOP, MAKE IT FADE
Tired of carrying all this weight
Screaming out, I won’t back down
I won’t be swallowed now
(Breakdown – Heavy chugs, distorted echoes.)
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(Verse 2 – Darker, More Aggressive)
Same damn war, no escape
Demons knocking at my gate
Punching walls inside my brain
Every moment feels the same
Losing grip, losing time
I won’t let them take what’s mine
I’m done crawling through the mud
If I go down, I go in blood
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(Pre-Chorus – The Boiling Point, Again)
I’m sick of this, I’m done with this
I need a break, I need to quit
It don’t stop, it won’t give in
Like my mind is caving in
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(Chorus – Louder, Angrier, Fighting Back)
MAKE IT STOP, MAKE IT BREAK
I’m about to fucking cave
I need strength, I need a spark
Before I drown inside the dark
MAKE IT STOP, MAKE IT FADE
Tired of carrying all this weight
Screaming out, I won’t back down
I won’t be swallowed now
(Music fades to an eerie hum, tension building before the breakdown.)
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(Bridge – The Eye of the Storm, Haunting & Defiant)
(Whispered, eerie, like voices inside the head.)
I don’t wanna cry no more
I don’t wanna feel this war
I just wanna break these chains
But I can’t escape the pain
(Sudden explosion of sound, heavy breakdown with deep guttural vocals.)
I DON’T WANNA DROWN TONIGHT
I JUST WANNA FEEL ALIVE
I’M NOT GONNA FADE AWAY
I’M GONNA FUCKING FIGHT TODAY
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(Final Chorus – The Rage Meets the Strength)
MAKE IT STOP, MAKE IT BREAK
I’m about to fucking cave
But I can’t quit, not like this
Still got fight inside my fists
MAKE IT STOP, MAKE IT FADE
I’ll drag myself out this grave
Screaming out, I won’t back down
I won’t be swallowed now
(Final breakdown—hard-hitting drums, distorted echoes.)
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(Outro – Dark & Haunting Whisper, Fading into Silence)
(Music fades, eerie whispers linger.)
Spinning, spinning… still in my mind…
But I won’t let it take my life…
Maybe someday, maybe soon…
I’ll find my way out of this room…
(Final lingering guitar note fades into silence.)
