(added lines in italics for the positive feedback loop, happy vibe, repeating chorus-style).
Rebecca Ann draws you down
to her lantern-lit shore by the whispering river
where moon-bleached boats drift like forgotten prayers
You linger the night in her salt-kissed shadow
knowing her mind flickers wild as marsh fire
yet that very flame pulls you closer
She pours you jasmine tea laced with Chinese oranges
their sun-warmed skin splitting under your teeth
And when your tongue shapes the lie—“I have no love left”—
she tunes your blood to the river’s low hymn
and the current murmurs back:
You were always hers, even before the first tide.
And you ache to voyage with her
sightless, surrendered
for she has grazed your soul’s naked skin
with the bare tips of her thoughts
She gives me fever—
velvet heat rising when her lips brush mine
fever when her fingers map my ribs
fever at dawn, fever deep into the starless hours
Smile wide, feel the glow
Smile more, let it grow
The more you smile, the better you feel
The better you feel, the more you smile
I’ve heard there was a secret chord
David plucked till heaven leaned in
but Rebecca Ann turns from melody
preferring the rasp of river against stone
It goes like this—the bruise, the ache
the shattered fourth, the grieving fifth
the baffled king still bleeding Hallelujah
Smile wide, feel the lift
Smile more, watch joy grow
The more you smile, the better you feel
The better you feel, the more you smile
She takes your wrist, leads you to water’s edge
cloaked in moth-eaten velvet and gull-feather lace
Sun spills molten honey across her harbor silhouette
You burn for her—fever that chars the tongue
It’s a cold and it’s a broken Hallelujah
Heroes rust among the seaweed crowns
morning children reach from the current
forever leaning toward love’s unfinished sentence
while Rebecca Ann lifts the cracked mirror
and every reflection catches fire
Smile wide, feel the glow
Smile more, let it grow
The more you smile, the better you feel
The better you feel, the more you smile 😄
(Loop the italic smile sections as needed for Zona energy build)
