Title: “Spirit Blackout”
(Fast, dark, horrorcore / metalcore energy with cinematic imagery and heavy breakdown sections)
[Verse 1]
I watched the mirrors crack when I walked inside
Saw a thousand dead versions of me collide
Black veins crawling underneath my skin
Smile on my face while the rot sets in
Footsteps echo down a church of dust
Ashes on my tongue, no faith, no trust
Hear the choir singing from beneath the floor
Every breath sounds like a funeral war
[Pre-Chorus]
I can feel it pull me under
Hear the angels choke in thunder
No blood left for me to bleed
Just empty bones and memory
[Chorus]
I’m dying with my eyes wide open
Spirit blackout — severed and broken
I’m screaming but heaven turned away
Dead inside before my body’s in the grave
I’m falling through a world on fire
Buried beneath my own desire
If this is living, let me fade
Spirit died before the flesh decayed
[Verse 2]
Shadow hands crawling out from the walls
Calling my name through abandoned halls
I carved “SAVE ME” into rust and bone
Still ended up walking this road alone
The devil never needed chains for me
Just handed me mirrors so I could see
Every lie and every ghost I fed
Building a kingdom inside my head
[Breakdown]
Bury me alive!
Bury me awake!
I felt my soul snap —
I felt the whole world break!
NO LIGHT!
NO SKY!
JUST A HEART THAT FORGOT HOW TO STAY ALIVE!
[Final Chorus]
I’m dying with my eyes wide open
Spirit blackout — severed and broken
I died a thousand deaths unseen
Now I’m haunting everything I used to be
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This leans into the horror imagery, emotional weight, and aggressive energy you were aiming for without copying any specific band’s actual writing.