X bits and pieces x

🔥 Refined Hook (Trap / Melodic Flow)

I wind you up and watch you go

I wind you up and there you go

Bits and pieces everywhere

Our love was grand, so rare

I’ll fix you there, I swear I will

Take these hands and hold you still

I wind you up and watch you go

I wind you up and let you go

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🎧 More “Trap-Flow” Version (Smoother Bounce + 808 Pocket)

I wind you up, I watch you go

I wind you up, there you go

Pieces falling everywhere

We had a love that felt so rare

I’ll fix you there, don’t fade away

Hold you close but you won’t stay

I wind you up, I let you go

I wind you up, I watch you go

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⚡ Harder Emotional Trap Version (More Edge / Juice WRLD vibe)

I wind you up and watch you go

I wind you up and there you go

Bits and pieces on the floor

We were golden, now we’re more

I try to fix you, keep you whole

But you keep slipping from my soul

I wind you up, I lose control

I wind you up, I let you go

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🎛️ What I changed (so it hits like a record)

* Smoothed syllable flow so it sits on 808 half-time bounce

* Repeated “I wind you up” as a trap hypnotic motif

* Broke longer lines into singable pocket phrases

* Added emotional contrast between control vs loss

* Kept your core imagery (“pieces”, “rare love”, “fix you”) intact