

Prompt / Lyrics
[Verse 1] Rot in the hay bales Dust on the rusted latch Moon through the slatted walls Paint peeled back like scabs Rope swing From a cracked old beam It sways when there’s zero wind Like it’s calling me in [Chorus] Rafters Rafters Still hear the awful laughter Colder than the winter air A sight I just can’t bear It’s here and nowhere It’s here and nowhere Rafters Rafters Still hear the awful laughter [Verse 2] Boot prints in the dirt floor Only mine But I feel more Something breathing in the loft Every step The boards cough [low vocal register] “Turn back” Rings inside my skull But I’ve come this far And the dark feels full [Chorus] [Bridge] [guttural] I see the shadow kick But the body never drops I hear the neck bones snap Then the film just stops Hay dust dances In a shape that stares I scream But it steals Every ounce of air [Chorus]
Tags
metal, Early-2000s metalcore: drop‑tuned chugs, pinch harmonics, and machine-gun double kick. Verses tight and tense with palm-muted guitars, low male vocals bordering on a growl. Chorus opens into big, shouted gang vocals with a dissonant lead line. Bridge dives into a half-time breakdown with disembodied childlike laughs sampled low in the mix, then a final chorus hit and abrupt cut to reverb tail.
2:49
No
1/2/2026