Damn Fine – Full Track Blueprint (~3 min)
[0:00 – 0:10] Intro
• “Yeah… She too damn fine…”
• Beat: low, creeping 808s, slow build.
[0:11 – 0:40] Verse 1 (Your Original)
• Lyrics:
She got nice long legs and a body that kill a demon,
She’s got real dark hair and eyes that will leave you bleeding,
When she gets in bed your going to hear her screaming,
Her moves so good they’ll stop you from leaving.
• Beat: steady groove, instrumental fading in gradually.
• Ad-libs: none, keep it raw and clean for storytelling.
[0:41 – 1:00] Hook 1
• Lyrics:
This chick too damn fine (too fine), she bad, she mine,
Got me locked in lust, can’t break that line,
No chance to survive (no chance), can’t run, can’t hide,
One kiss from her and you’re barely alive.
• Beat: full drop, synths wide, 808 heavy.
• Ad-libs: “alive!” on last word.
[1:01 – 1:30] Verse 2 (CORPSE-Style Feature)
• Lyrics:
She drag me down, I’m addicted to pain,
Venom on her lips, runnin’ straight through my veins (hah),
Body on my body, yeah, I’m losin’ my breath,
She the type to make you fall in love with your death.
Claws on my skin, yeah, she tear me apart,
Whisper in my ear while she rippin’ my heart (fuck),
I can’t escape, she got control of my mind,
Succubus touch, leave your soul left behind.
• Beat: stripped back, deep 808s, let vocals dominate.
• Ad-libs: minimal (“hah / fuck”), only on strong lines.
[1:31 – 1:50] Hook 2
• Repeat hook with echo ad-lib “barely alive…”
• Beat: full drop, layered vocals.
• Optional subtle background whispers for dark vibe.
[1:51 – 2:10] Bridge
• Lyrics:
Succubus queen, got me beggin’ for more,
Every night’s a battle, every touch is a war,
I know she dangerous, I know the cost,
But I’d sell my soul just to never get lost.
• Beat: cut low, tension build, snare riser into final hook.
• Ad-libs: subtle “hah” on last line.
[2:11 – 2:40] Final Hook / Outro
• Repeat hook, biggest drop of the song.
• End with fading growl “alive…” as beat tails off.
• Optional: echo last line with minimal beat for lingering tension.
⚡ Overlay Notes:
• Your original verse = clean, descriptive storytelling.
• CORPSE-style verse = dark, raw, minimal ad-libs, contrast in energy.
• Hooks = chanty, hype, full energy, crowd-ready.
• Beat dynamics: low build → steady → full drop → stripped CORPSE verse → drop → bridge tension → final hook drop.
