Why Do You Hate Me

Name: Why Do You Hate Me
Duration: 220 s
9RAW6
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Prompt / Lyrics
[Intro] – 
[soft, echoing whispers] 
[over the clean guitar]
*(I still knock…)*  
(why won't you let me in…)  
*(even though I know…)*  
(yeah… I know…)

[Verse 1 – fragile whispers under the lines]  
 “Holding cookies that are going cold”  

(they're getting cold… just like you…)  

 “I fucking hate you now”  
(no… no you don't… [*soft sob*]  

 “The kid you used to give…”  
(come back… please…)

[Pre-Chorus – rising, broken]
 “Now you’re just… misery”  

[screamed whisper]:
(why'd you leave me here?!)

[Chorus – full screams and layered ad libs]
 “JEREMY! WHY DO YOU HATE MY GUTS?!”  
(TEAR ME APART!)  
(HATE ME!)  

 “see you smile just once”
  
[raw sob]: (just once… man… just once…)  

 “All I want is to make you smile again…”  

(I'd die for it… )
[*choked*]:(I'd fucking die…)

*[Quick Guitar Solo]*
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[Verse 2 – deeper, more desperate whispers]  
 “And locked me out of this”  
(I’m still outside… freezing…)  

 “And you’ll remember brighter days…”  

[*voice cracks*]: (remember me… remember us… )

[Second Chorus – even more unhinged]
 “just to get a smile from you”  

[*screamed*]:(PLEASE!)  
(I’M BEGGING!)  

 “HATE ME MORE IF IT MAKES YOU WHOLE”  
(TAKE IT ALL!)  
(LEAVE NOTHING!)

 “All I want is to make you smile again…”  

 [*long pained exhale*]: (I’m breaking…)

[Bridge] – 
[stripped down, most vulnerable ad libs] :

 “So I’ll keep singing… even if you scream…”  

[*whispered, overlapping*]: (I'll keep singing… I'll keep trying… don't shut the door… don't…)  

 “Even if you hate me…”  
(I can take it… I can take the hate… just don't disappear… [*soft crying sound*]

*[guitar lead up]*

[Final Chorus] – 
[total emotional breakdown], [layered ad libs piling up]**  
 “YOU REALLY HATE MY GUTS…”  
(IT HURTS! IT FUCKING HURTS!)  

“where your laugh used to be”  
(it's gone… it's all gone… [*sobbing*]

 “just to set your spirit free”  
(free you… from me… if that's what you need…)  

 “THEN HATE ME TILL I DIE”  
(KILL ME WITH IT!)[ *full scream*] 
(DO IT!)  

“All I’ve ever wanted… Was to make you smile again…”  
[*long, shattered breath*]…(again… please…)

[Outro – barely audible] [devastated whispers fading out]
“I’m still here…”  
(always… always here…)  

 “Even if you hate me…”  
(hate me forever… just don’t forget me…)  

 “One more time…”  
(one more time… Jeremy…)  

“I miss you…”  
[*long silence, then a broken* ](…I miss you so fucking much…)  
[*final whisper, almost inaudible*]( come back…)