

Prompt / Lyrics
[Movement I- The song begins with silence, broken only by a soft, rhythmic scratching sound. A clean guitar enters, playing a discordant, lonely melody with heavy delay. There are no drums yet.] [Vocal: Whispered] I checked the locks three times tonight. I checked the windows. I checked the light. But the intruder is already inside. It didn't break down the door. It grew through the floorboards. A bloom of velvet black. Spreading across the drywall of my chest. I can feel the spores settling in my lungs. Converting the oxygen into panic. Converting the blood into lead. [Movement II- A snare drum begins a nervous, rolling military beat. The clean guitar gets louder, joined by a bass line that sounds like a growl. The tension is uncomfortable.] [Vocal: Melodic, breathy singing] It starts as a hum in the wires. A frequency only the dogs can hear. My hands are shaking, but the earth is still. I am vibrating against my own will. The house is breathing. The hallway is stretching out for miles. I am shrinking in the corner of the room. While the shadow paints the ceiling in a shade of gloom. Can you hear it? The chewing? The eating? [Movement III- The drums switch to a slow, massive crash. The guitars explode into a Shoegaze "Wall of Sound"—thick, fuzzy, and overwhelming. The vocals switch to a raw, emotional scream, buried slightly in the mix like someone screaming from behind a wall.] [Vocal: Screamed] IT’S IN THE WALLS! IT’S IN THE VEINS! I AM THE HOST FOR THE HURRICANE! THERE IS NO CURE FOR THE GRAVITY! IT’S CRUSHING THE AIR OUT OF ME! I AM ROTTING FROM THE INSIDE OUT! A GARDEN OF GREY! A MONUMENT TO DOUBT! [Movement IV- The tempo drops drastically. This is the "Doomgaze" section. Every chord rings out for four beats. It is heavy, slow, and exhausting.] [Vocal: Drawn out, agonized screams] LET! [HEAVY CHORD] IT! [HEAVY CHORD] GROW! [FEEDBACK SQUEAL] COVER THE WINDOWS! SEAL THE DOORS! I DON’T LIVE HERE ANYMORE! I AM JUST THE furniture! I AM JUST THE DUST! CONSUMED! BY THE RUST! [Movement V- The heaviness cuts abruptly to a single, high-pitched synth tone. It sounds like a flatline.] [Vocal: Clean, dry] It’s quiet now. It’s finally dark. No more fear. Just the mold. And me. Oooohhhhh Ohhhhh Ohhhhhhhh Ooooooooh-ohhhh Ohhhhh-ooooh Fading and falling Flailing and drowning Dying and hiding Flatlining Fading and falling Flailing and drowning Dying and hiding Flatlining [Screamed vocals] I'M DYING! [Interlude- The wall of distortion cuts out abruptly, leaving a high-pitched ringing feedback that mimics tinnitus. The drums stop completely. A clean guitar enters, playing a repetitive, dissonant picking pattern that sounds like water dripping in a cave. It is out of time with the delay pedal, creating a disorienting, spiraling effect.] [Instrumental solo] [Slowly, a deep, synthetic sub-bass begins to swell underneath, vibrating the floor. It doesn't have a rhythm; it just breathes in and out like a sick lung.]
Tags
Sad Shoegaze metalcore, sad, hazy ambiance slow build, massive doom breakdown, emotional male vocals, intrumental ending
6:23
No
1/15/2026