

Prompt / Lyrics
[Verse 1] Lantern swingin’ like a hangman’s rope Boots on rails, I taste the dust Old man said “boy, the gold ain’t hope It’s just another kind of rust” Shovel hits bone or maybe stone Hard to tell this deep in hell Hear a tap-tap-tap on the broken ore Like a fingernail on a church bell [Chorus] Tommy knockers in the vein Tap my name in the black rock vein Sayin’ “dig boy, deeper, we’ll ease your pain” But the deeper that I go, the less I feel sane Tommy knockers in the vein [Verse 2] Cards and whiskey in the bunkhouse blue They laugh it off, but their hands still shake Every man here’s heard that knock Right before the timber breaks I saw eyes glow where the light won’t reach Tiny teeth in a crooked grin Little shadows crawlin’ up the tunnel wall Whisperin’, “you ain’t leavin’ again” (uh-huh) [Chorus] Tommy knockers in the vein Tap my name in the black rock vein Sayin’ “dig boy, deeper, we’ll ease your pain” But the deeper that I go, the less I feel sane Tommy knockers in the vein [Bridge] I piled up gold by the wooden tracks More than a poor man ought to own Still I hear ‘em drumming on the fractured backs Of every man this mine has stolen [Chorus] Tommy knockers in the vein Tap my name in the black rock vein Sayin’ “dig boy, deeper, we’ll ease your pain” When the roof comes down like a runaway train They’ll be singin’ soft over my remains Tommy knockers in the vein
Tags
country, Grim outlaw country with male vocals; low-tuned acoustic and baritone guitar over a slow, dragging kick and brushed snare. Distant tremolo electric swells and mournful pedal steel hang like fog. Verses stay hushed and close-mic’d, chorus widens with gang-style harmonies and a gritty bass throb. Subtle reverb makes the mine feel cavernous; final chorus strips to voice and guitar, then ends on a single, ringing chord.
3:34
No
2/1/2026