verse 1]
Kept our bills in a Crown Royal bag
Gas light glowing in a broke Chevrolet
Ramen on the stove at midnight
Stretching thirty bucks another week
Both of us broken long before we met
Becoming what the other needed most
[Pre-Chorus 1]
Nobody saw the war in this house
They only saw the smoke after the fire
[Chorus 1]
We carried pain like a family name
Shame like bricks inside our chest
I kept feeding all my demons
You carried the weight of my mess
Every time I nearly disappeared
You stood in that doorway shaking
Begging me not to let go
Yeah, we were two worn-out hearts
Building a home out of what we carried
[Verse 2]
I came from fists and broken promises
Digging my own grave deep in the dirt
You looked right through all my wreckage
Saw a man who was worth saving
When I’d given up on surviving
[Pre-Chorus 2]
I kept walking back toward the fire
You stayed on your knees and prayed
[Chorus 2]
We carried pain like a family name
Regret stitched into our skin
I pawned our peace to buy my poison
You went and bought it back again
Everybody talks about forever
Till forever gets this hard
You stayed through every nightmare
That tried to tear us apart
Yeah, we were two worn-out souls
Building a home out of what we carried
[Bridge]
I was the one with all the baggage
You were the one holding the Bible
Praying me out of the dark
Redemption ain't for perfect people
It’s for the ones who finally choose
To stop tearing down the only home
They have left to lose
[Final Chorus]
If you’re out there in the dark struggling
If shame’s got you by the throat
There’s still somebody praying for you
If love survived a story like ours
Maybe yours ain't gone too far
God still builds beautiful things
Out of shattered hearts and scars
Yeah, we’re still standing somehow
After all we carried
[Outro]
Yeah, after all we carried…
We’re still standing now.
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